I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

Last Updated: 02.07.2025 02:07

I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

He forgets his wallet

He's never available on Saturdays

He's always helping his ex

How can she get her mouth taped shut? She should not have freedom of speech.

He always cracks his knuckles.

He's always the last one to leave a party

He is always late

Why are some people afraid of monsters?

He doesn't like her cat